hiie,back again!!long time never blog le...todae went to chinatown as our learning trail..fun ?!of course lah !!well, i wrote a compo bout the chinatown that has to be summited to teacher by tomorrow...

here it goes :

It was a long journey to chinatown. As my friends were talking happily, soon it started to rain , i felt sleepy so i slept . I could hear people talking away . Beside me , Adilah knows that i am asleep , she took my clipboard from my hands and i wake up. Kailin told me that many people know i am asleep .

When we reach there , there were not many people . First , we went to the wet market . It was not a "wet" market as it is clean . We ask many question from the stall owner . Next , we went to the chinese heritage centre . I took a picture using my friend's camera of a samsui woman . I know the story of the samsui woman . My art teacher , who is a famous taecher likes to tell stories about ancient times.
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P.S I know that my compo sounds weird and there are lots of mistakes in it . Pls do not comment anything. I am just a primary four student. how could i write well ?! i know your eng is good..pls keep things to yourself .thxs !!
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